This story kept me up well past my bedtime! Great setup with compelling inhabitants. Jacqs is an interesting, complex character. The author did a great job of writing someone along the Jayne model, while also toning down that played-for-laughs caricature and showing us someone quite well-realized in his own right. I think I read that the author is expanding this into a work for professional release? Maybe? I hope so! There's a lot more about this world that I'd like to dig into. Gotta say though, my eyes glazed over when we started detailing into the 72 different classifications of wooblysexual, and how each and every character in this world formally registers their chosen classification into their Permanent Records. Kind of a tension-killer to me.